Well, you've officially made me afraid of Yuna - a character I always imagined as meek and... calm. But I like this, this other point of view. I definitely understand why this is a short one-shot, any more would have been too much.

Nice idea. Wonderful writing.

I'll be reading more of your works!

thank you.

I absolutely love your interpretation. FFX is one the few games I actually got to the ending of. I remember feeling cheated at the end, because I felt that the ending was unresolved. This fic. really helps resolve everything in my eyes. This is beautifully written too. Good work.

Ouch! I think Yuna would have felt like this - should have felt like this! Great work.

This one is as good as your other one... hell, that's how I felt at the end!! You captured it perfectly, very touching. I'd love to see something long by you, I'm sure it'd be grand!

*eyes water* How do you those emotions down s perfectly? They seem so real! Wow...

Well, it's 8:30 in the morning and I'm already trying not to cry. Sigh. Seems to be the doom of an FF sap. This was extremely sad, and well written. My absolute favorite part was the last paragraph, because it was so terribly tragic, bittersweet. This was wonderfully done.

good ficlet :-) you should write more, maybe about what the other characters are thinking during the game.

Very, very nice. I always enjoy your writing. You should post more of your stories. ;)

beautiful...remarkable :p

A lovely descriptive piece that almost brought me to tears. Simply beautiful.

I liked it too. It's very nice written and expresses her feelings pretty well.

Very nice...*pouts* you should do a reflection of Tidus's feelings as well