Gar dived to catch her; Tara sidestepped and missed her landing head first in leaves. Everyone sitting at the table laughed at Gar’s futile attempt. He got back up and chased after her again.


hehe -giggles like a fangirl- Favorite part (besides the kiss) of course, chasing is ALWAYS so kyoot. x)!

-The guys chase Tara down the field with Vic and Gar quickly gaining on her. She tossed the ball to Kori who took it the rest of the way. Rich chased after her arms and legs pumping as he raced to catch her. Unfortunately Rich wasn’t quick enough and Kori ran an easy touchdown. The girls celebrated.-

BOOYAH BBY! WOOT!! I wish I could have that kind of victory more often -glares at my dad and uncles-

Still trying to get over how weird it is for Slade to be a teen btw... LOL! Really cute fic, it was a nice thing to read in the morning (even with spongebob playing right behind me xDD).

AND YEY FOR AUTMN!!

Cute fic, really :D
LaterZ
-Tia Out

I like the setting for it especially in light of the time of year. I love the description, it's like I'm right there. I love how they're able to mess around and have fun and such. I love the Rich/Kori parts.

Great job on it so far.

Good job! =D

This is a really good story! Keep it up! :>

I liked it. Short, but sweet to see them taking time off. Good job :D

a nice story that was!
its good to have chapters that are mostly just about people kicking back and enjoying a good day out i think!