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S 2008-11-16 . chapter 2
How about you name the dog,Hurry up and update the powers of light? Cuz seriously,what's takin so long?!UPDATE!
pakkunlover20 2008-09-07 . chapter 2
WOW this looks to be an interesting story! I hope that you complete the third chapter soon! Can't wait to read it!
Compleatly Random Dissorder 2008-09-07 . chapter 2
dog with the Kanji on his head. Well maybe Keiiji?
AvatardsUnite MM 2008-08-27 . chapter 2
Awesome chapter! I love how close Kakashi is to his dogs :) (I'm sort of a dog trainer so I can relate XD) I can't remember what the kanji dog looks like, if you know where a picture of it is can you send me the link and I'll try to come up with a name?
ninbunny alchemist 2008-08-27 . chapter 2
i like this a lot cant wait for more
Archraven 2008-08-27 . chapter 2
Lovely chapter!
Prescripto13 2008-08-26 . chapter 2
This chapter meshed well with your other story. That bandaged greyhound always was one of my favorites--definitely looks like a runner, and very loyal.

It was also intriguing to see the hostility directed towards the Hatake by both the Uchiha and the Inuzuka. Kakashi's near knife fight with Obito seemed fitting as a result. Good work.
Prescripto13 2008-08-24 . chapter 1
Aw . . . that was adorable! I enjoyed reading it.
AvatardsUnite MM 2008-08-23 . chapter 1
Awesome! I like how you explained not just how but WHY he got Pakkun :). This is also well written :)!
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