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bluewolf8000 2008-11-29 . chapter 2
omg this was the best story i've ever read. it's so great the way you wrote it, please please please update soon! i love this story so much and it's driving me crazy cause i want to know what happens next. again, great story thanks for writing it.
ladysubaru83 2008-11-08 . chapter 2
oh man come on finish it quickly plz XS
Mistress of Destruction 2008-09-05 . chapter 2
This is really good so far. I've seen a few other fics where Vergil and Dante have become human, but this is my favorite thus far. I just hope that unlike all those other fics you are actually able to complete this one. Hopefully you can update soon again, cause I can't wait to read more!
Eric Draven201 2008-09-04 . chapter 2
:O WOW! Really... powerful, gut-wretching stuff (and only on the second chapter no less)! Truly beyond words, I really don't know what to say... this just blows any and all things I have out of the water! O:

I need more! Please update soon, okay? =P
The Hecateae 2008-09-04 . chapter 2
New chapter! *Cheers*
Dhuaine 2008-08-31 . chapter 1
Sounds great! Fics with human!Dante or Vergil can be counted on one's fingers, and I can't recall any that reached any significant ending... which is a pity, because I'm fascinated by this theme! ;) I'm especially thrilled to see such a fic being written by you. It's like... guarantee of quality. ;)
Can't wait for next chapter!
The Hecateae 2008-08-24 . chapter 1
Cool!
bunnyears 2008-08-21 . chapter 1
great start...looking forward for the next chapter.
please update soon!
Hunter of Darkness 2008-08-20 . chapter 1
Wow, awesome story! I'm looking forward to the update. Keep up the good work!
Eric Draven201 2008-08-20 . chapter 1
Awesome chapter Luce. I would like to definitely see more of this!
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