Hm, once again, I'm curious about Iah Li and Lex's relationship. Very intriguing, that.

Poor Tara. I feel so bad for her.

I loved the fight scene. I can almost picture it in my head. Tara's reaction when she accused Lex is totally understandable. There is still something about Lex that I don't like but I can most likely just extremely biased. I wonder how long Kennedy could keep Tara's presence secret? And I have a feeling that Iah might decide to take different direction in his attack on Lex... Cannot wait to find out what happens next. Please post again soon :)

Me again! This is still so amazing. I really can't wait to read more... poor Tara baby =( And Lex, too, they're both so sweet. I think that's all. It's fantastic. =D

Ohmigod! That was so depressing! Even with Git ruining the mood with his horribly cheerful music and showing me weird pictures... (*ahem*) Especially the Tara-Willow-Kennedy bit! I so nearly teared up! And the bit about Lex worried about finding Tara alone and dead :-( I feel so bad for her!

And the name Alexia is really pretty :-D

Anyway... :'-(

I am a little confused at the entrance of Iah Li, but i imagine that is intended.

Poor Tara, having to see that. :(

I absolutely love the part when Tara saw Willow and Kennedy. I'm hoping that she now plans on fixing that whole situation. lol. I cannot wait to read what happens next. I wonder where Tara is? And I cannot wait for either Willow to find out that Kennedy saw Tara or for Tara to confront Kennedy. Oh... I like that idea :)

"Not every story has a happy ending." Lex replied softly, hazy eyes downcast. She looked at Tara with an unreadable expression on her face, but unmistakable pain in her eyes. She knew all too well about stories with sad endings...
"But you of all people deserve one!"

So cute! :-D

I love the chapter! :-D Seriously. Love. And the bit with the soul (or whatever - I don't remember enough of Bleach >

I liked the beginning, with Lex and Tara arguing. After that, it seemed a bit rushed--but seeing as I am in college myself, I too understand how crazy it can be.

Hmm, and the plot thickens. So now not only is Lex lying, but so is Kennedy. Yes, intriguing indeed.

My only criticism is that Giles seemed a little OoC, but not too much.

Good job, off to read the next chapter.

Where is Tara? OMG! lol First, I cannot wait to see Lex's reaction when she does find Tara again. And two, I hope that Tara didn't listen to Lex and goes looking for you-know-who lol... :) Please continue, I'm willing to wait patiently because I know how stressful college can be. :)

AH! I can't believe that you are having Kennedy "lie" to Willow. ;) lol I really loved the scene with Kennedy and Giles, it was so cute. And the part with the picture of Willow and Tara still being in her purse but behind the picture of Willow and Kennedy, was priceless. It was so clear that it made it easy to visualize Kennedy looking for the photo.

Tara's thoughts still being about Willow, almost made me want to cry. I need some scenes with more close calls between both Tara/Lex and Willow/Kennedy... I totally look forward to reading the next chapter. :)

Aww! It's all so cute and sad! I feel really bad for Kennedy, especially that thing about Soul Mates...

And poor confused Tara :-(

Little problem--unless the number had more than one hyphen in it, you should spell it out instead of putting down the number itself--"one" instead of "1" for example. Otherwise, it sorta tears you out of the mood of the story.

Other than that, it's good. Dark hair and dark eyes--I'm thinking either Faith or Kennedy, although why either of them would recognize Tara is beyond me . . . either that, or it's someone completely and totally obvious that I should know and just don't because my brain is sleepy.

Boo! Just to say this is really awesome - as I've said before I really, really love your writing. Lex is a great character, I love her already - though her background's so sad! =( It's all so... suspenseful and cool, I really can't wait to read more. That is all!

You don't totally suck at suspense. lol. OMG! If I'm right then it's Kennedy standing in front of them. Please post another chapter again soon, I mean really soon. I cannot wait to find out what happens next. :)