  Poetoflife14 2008-10-31 . chapter 3Update! *puppy eyes* please? |
| Poetoflife14 2008-09-19 . chapter 4 Wow, this is really good! I love it! Please update soon! |
| grapedragon 2008-09-18 . chapter 4 so, it WAS axel^^
haha, what will they do now?
axel won't sent him back, will he?
and what will happen to roxas...
I wait for the next chapter^^ |
| ScreamForSOH 2008-09-18 . chapter 4 yay.
updates. :D
Love this, I really liked this chapter. Very amusing.
Am really interested to see where this will lead. |
| UltimateSorceress 2008-09-02 . chapter 3 yet another great chapter! the suspense! update soon pwease ^^
Ulti- |
| Fluffy Horror 2008-08-31 . chapter 3 Just read the third chapter! I sincerely wish I could submit some constructive criticism, as I know you want some, but I'm not very good at that. :< All I can say is I wish it was longer! I'm keeping up with this avidly! It's such a gripping story, and I'm so surprised you only have nine reviews! I'm proud to be one of your reviewers. This is awesome, keep up the good work please! |
| grapedragon 2008-08-31 . chapter 3 oh, oh ,oh... now we're getting somewhere, huh?
what will happen now?
is it axel or not?
Continue soon, please! |
| ScreamForSOH 2008-08-30 . chapter 3 oh.
how exciting.
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love it.
update soon yeah?
xoxo |
| woodbox 2008-08-30 . chapter 3 D: how could you do that!
chapter 4! Please, soon!
I like how you write. C: |
| ScreamForSOH 2008-08-12 . chapter 2 looking forward to next chapter.
rather like this fic.
xoxo |
| Hadrianus-dark1 2008-08-11 . chapter 2 Awesome story!
Sorry that this review is so short! |
| UltimateSorceress 2008-08-11 . chapter 2 woot! sorry i didn't log in D: but i LOVE this story update soon! |
| Fluffy Horror 2008-08-10 . chapter 2 In the first few sentences you already had me hooked! This is a fantastic piece of work. Gripping, you can just watch the dominos fall into place. Thank you for taking your time to write this! I have it bookmarked. Please continue the story! I can't wait to fint out what happens next! |
| grapedragon 2008-08-10 . chapter 2 so, roxy found his donor...
but now I have a serious question...
will roxas DIE?
PLEASE, don't be so cruel!
someone, give him a kidney!
now, that this is said... I like this story, hopefully you'll continue |
| princesskairineedsaprince 2008-08-03 . chapter 1 ::blink,blink:: woah!O.o i am stupefied at the fact that, even though it's only a day old, it doesn't have reviews. this is a literary travesty if you ask me xD psh, this chapter was amazing! seriously..i feel sorry for roxas:(( and normally i'm numb. numbnumbnumb to all kinds of emotions xD jej, i love how you jump back and forth in time to add emphasis..looking forward to the next chapter:3 this was a beautifully=) |
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