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Twilight Phantom Dragon 2008-11-28 . chapter 5
So far, so amazingly excellent. I love this version more than the original Aladdin, probably because it's Ben 10: AF. The way you portray all the characters is very good though my favorite would definitely be Kevin. I can't wait for the next update though I must say that you should take your time.
Gothchic56@gmail.com 2008-11-25 . chapter 5
Yarr.
[This Is Kurai Kaminari. xD]
[I'd usually log in, but I can't remember all of my info...*sweatdrop*]

Hey! I'm really loving every part of this fanfic, and I keep eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Like I've said before, there's just something about this that sparks my mind better than the original Aladdin. Maybe it's because it's BTAF. xD

ANYHOW.
I was actually going to ask if I could draw the Aladdin-ized versions of the characters. So it's a go? :D

I can't wait to hear from you again; Keep on writing, it's one of the things I look forward to!

[PS. I flipped once I found out I was right about Paradox. xD]
Animejunkies'meow' 2008-11-23 . chapter 5
Aww... I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer 2008-11-20 . chapter 5
WO, NEXT CHAPTER QUICK, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Shay Durrow 2008-11-17 . chapter 5
Hmm. You need an artist, eh? Cx I might be able to help. I don't usually draw humans, but I'm sure I could make something by the next update.

This was another great chapter.
Maryem 2008-11-17 . chapter 5
ah
take it back kevin you can;t let her go
thanks for updating
-maryem
Lisazure 2008-11-17 . chapter 5
I love your story, it's awesome (tough I'm a bit sad for Kevin...even if he totally deserved it)
It would be fun to draw your characters ^^
Chibi Hime 2008-11-16 . chapter 5
I have been plugged XD
Thanks!
I was really surprised there wasn't more Darkstar ficiton out there.
I can't wait to see what you do with my favorite AF villain...especially after that teaser in the author's note XD

But back to your fic
XD
I love that Kevin didn't...you know, forget that Julie liked Ben. I think it fits him in this universe well. He made sure she got to come along and see Ben and have a shot at getting him too, not just be his servant or something like that.
Chibi Hime 2008-11-12 . chapter 4
PARADOX.

His inclusion is made of win...especially how you did it. Eccentric cosmic beings make life interesting.

Aww...more MikeXCharmie hintage, which I'm all about.
Wow.
Something really is up with Mike.
I find myself really wondering what it might be X3

Cheers!
Hope to see more soon!
Chibi Hime 2008-11-12 . chapter 2
I like that Mike is slyly putting the moves on Gwen, though I can't shake the feeling that there's a deeper implication for why he wants to marry her XD

Charmcaster's crush X3
I love it...but of course I would.

As someone whose gotten a lot of messages about the pairing and age differences (wow, people care that much XD)...

Speaking of her..was she actually sixteen? I don't remember them giving her a specific age. I always had her pegged around 14 or fifteen though. Plus...how do we know how old she really is? Hex was able to slow his aging. It doesn't matter XD
Mike on the other hand...for some reason, I always picked up that he was older than fifteen. Not much older...probably 16, 17, or 18 at the absolute oldest. He acts a lot more mature and experienced. Plus, since he's basically to Kevin what he was to Ben, I automatically added a year (Ben 10, Kevin 11: Kevin 16: Mike 17). So, the age difference wouldn't be huge...unless, she's like, really 120, but that's like 20 in Zoraster years XD
Return to Freedom 2008-11-09 . chapter 4
man u best hurry up and start writing again! this is amazing and i've been waiting for you to update for a while!! i've read it about 3 times already!

~britt
Zebwa 2008-11-08 . chapter 4
Kevin's camaro is the carpet, lol. x] But for some reason I thought the statue/deity thing was Verdona, with the flowers and stuff. "D Keep up the great work.
Shay Durrow 2008-10-25 . chapter 4
Yay! This is so great, I just had to read it all in one sitting. ^^ I love having one of my favorite movies and my /favorite/ pairings brought together in a story like this. I usually don't read fanfiction, but you write it so well it's a pleasure to read. :D (I actually signed up for this site so that I could add this to Story Watch.)

I can't wait for the next installment. :>
FaithandLove 2008-10-25 . chapter 4
Wow! I just started reading your story, and I really like it! :D Kevin's CARpet is great, haha, and Paradox as the genie is amazing. Very nice job crossing the two stories, and I can't wait to read more!
gwevinlover123 2008-10-24 . chapter 4
THAT WAS LIKE SO SUPER UPER AWESOME! i luvvs this story!
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