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mwahahaha! xD

Excellent chapter :) the description and details never leave me bored! Can't wait for your next update

And what the hell's with your quote all the time? It's so random! ..but likeably optimistic :)

I love how you are telling the story. I haven't played this game in a long time so this is a very nice refresher. Great job!

Personal really get in the way of writing... :( I would know... I hope you're doing better! ^^

Anyways, the chapter was AWESOME! I loved the description, very nice!

Rockin' man. The olympics definitally were awesome. I think the flash back wasn't told exactly as it should have been. Maybe it should have been like Link seeing a vision and describing what he saw. But that's just my opinion. Anyway, that was awesome. By the by, I read a couple of stories by a dude who says he's your brother, he's pretty good, can't remember his name though.

Cool chapter.

This is a good story! Update soon! please?

this was really good. hope you update soon.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!UPDATE SOON!!BELIEVE IT!!

Ef! xD
so cute! (well... at the end i mean :P)
anyway, so awsome! :D
continue!
I am not worthy i am not worthy i am not worthy
*bows at the amazing story writer*

Never cease to please :) And since I don't own a Wii or a Gamecube, I've never played TP first-hand. But thanks to your story, I'm getting bits and pieces of experiencing the ride.

Thanks SJ and I can't wait for more!

Hee hee...I laughed at the "Did you die?" part. XD It was funny...and the papa! Link just keeps getting better and better every chapter. I always love the little scenes at the beginning and the end.

I think this is my favorite chapter, too. The original scenes really worked wonders with the overall plotline. It just made the characters pop a little more, and the whole story seemed to flow better. I liked how you described the Twilight Realm... it gave me shivers. Lol, I can understand how Aryll was scared. XD

I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I'm enjoying an actual thorough...CANON...rewrite of a game. ;3

I really like this story, update soon

Now that was just plain awesome.

It's so like a child to sleep with one of their parents when they're afraid. It was surely sweet. Daddy's little girl, eh?

And Zellie. I'm pretty sure that was her at the door. Eavesdropping is just rude. Hahaha. j/k

Again I'm waiting for the next update. Guess I'll have to wait next week like Aryll. Aww...

But I know it'll be worth it. ;)

Amazing job.

-Sage

CURSE THOSE EVIL MONKEYS! XD

Those kids kinda got on my nerves though. Your dialogue from all the characters is spot-on, and the storyline is just amazing.

Good stuff. Ya know, boi!

-Sage