 Twilight Phantom Dragon 2008-11-25 . chapter 7Excellent job. I loved all of these stories. I'd have to say one of my favorites was "I'm Happy". I liked the other ones as well. They're written very well. Some parts made me feel like crying, others made me feel like laughing, or smiling in happiness. The thing with Paradox at the end was brilliant! Lucky Kevin, getting another shot at life. |
 FaithandLove 2008-11-10 . chapter 7Love the way you wrote this :D And that was a nice twist at the end, too. I guess Paradox's scheme didn't exactly work out... Good job! |
 the tomato 2008-10-19 . chapter 7kacha paradox man i love him ...hes the coolest batty old guy ...if they made a younger model that be the guy for me
kev is cute but i like them with a side of nuttyness |
 the tomato 2008-10-19 . chapter 6ben ten i love you and it is indeed hero time ...gwevin ftw because its love and ep 15 tho it had plenty of charater development for ben ...for the rest of the force even any one or stuff for grandpa max not so much... |
 JerichoGirl 2008-08-29 . chapter 7I did enjoy them all, but then again I'm mad crazy about Gwen/Kevin pairings.
T_T :D |
 strayphoenix 2008-07-27 . chapter 7I would totally do Paradox too (but you didn't hear that from me). Great fic! It was a real treat to read and it's great to see awesome Gwevin on ff.
-stray
PS: Say thanks to Warse-no-miko on devart for pimping you out XD |
 House of Night 2008-07-24 . chapter 7Awesome!
"You don’t make a move on Kevin Levin’s girl." That was really funny in my opinion! |
 starburstrocker 2008-07-20 . chapter 7[!]
omg! this was the most awesome thing ever! it was superbly written, greatness! i loved it. you did a fantastic job, and there was so much gwevinness!
amazing! this story is love! |
 Vegetas-Princess 2008-07-16 . chapter 7Gah! So awesome! I loved all of the chapters, of course, but I totally squeed when I realized you'd used Paradox! Very creative! Awesome job! |
 Animejunkies'meow' 2008-07-15 . chapter 7LOL yeah i like paradox too! Hes cool. Wow so that was a really good idea. It show a good possiblilty for how Kevin could be good in Alien Force and evil in Ben 10k. Well I must say, reading all these chapters has been highly entertaining. I really like your ideas and the whole lying theme you had. You are really good at changing genres as well. Very good job, and you should continue what you do ! |
 Animejunkies'meow' 2008-07-15 . chapter 6Wow that was genious!! Good idea to get them together! |
 Animejunkies'meow' 2008-07-15 . chapter 5LOL finally a date! And they are both really stubborn in this one! But it was good! |
 Animejunkies'meow' 2008-07-15 . chapter 4Aw...that one was cute! (even though Kevin totally hurt Gwen's feelings) At least he was mature enough to apologise. |
 Animejunkies'meow' 2008-07-15 . chapter 3Ah!! That one was cute! I like that idea of Kevin putting the engagment ring in a gun, thats probably something he would do! |
 Animejunkies'meow' 2008-07-15 . chapter 2*gasp* That was totally tragic! Kevin is stupid! And I like your idea to put Cash in here! |