so... i'm back!! and i am really excited to read tht enext chapter!! smut... *drools* jk. but i like this chapter and i think a stripper pole in their living room would be a good idea... i'd invest in that. haha. so i shall wait here imaptiently for the next chapter, so that i can be away to it!!

oh and personally, i think scarring xiggy like that was insanley awesome!! what a great way to quit a job!! ;)

hmm... secret back doors... to hide the strippers? won't people see their faces anyway if they're einside dancing? awell. anyways, i like this chapter, and i have this sneaking suspicion that axel planned this hole thing out, like roxas' wallet is in his back pocket or something... well i will just have to keep reading and find out now won't i?

gone so fast i was never here...

i wanna be a bartender, that would be fun. wish i would have found this story earlier, i always have good ideas that i refuse to write, they could have come in handy here... awell though, i guess i get to go see what the other reviewers wanted to see... *sigh* but it shall be fun!! ;)

here it goes, here it goes, here it goes again - OK Go, haha

well, this chapter is not what i had expected. i wonder what axel was thinking, getting himself into trouble like this... and seriously, who in the hell takes sleeping pills? drugs are for people with more problems then brain capacity... sometimes. but here i go, about to find out what happens...

gone in a flash

sadistic much? judging by your writing, i would say so, but thats all i have to go by. i wonder whats wrong with axel... it obvioulsy can't be anything good... and now i am off to find out!!

and now i'm gone

hmm... if you're dating supposedly dating people that you've known for three months... i sure am datig alot of people... i like axels logic! ;) but yes, i think it is cute that they are finally dating, you know? about time some real akuroku action decided to make itself known!

onto the next chapter!!

i like strippers... that go buy the name of axel... well now for the next chapter. oh and i rather like the mini chapters, 9t makes me feel like i'm accomplishing something new every thirty seconds or so. ;)

im getting my friends stripper poles for their bachelorette gifts XD sorry just had to say it...
anywho, i think this is a review of the last 2 or 3 chappies... they got buried and i just got around to reading them XD haha but i loved em! and i totally cant wait for the next part! :D

For a laugh on year, me and my frineds installed a pole into her BFs room for a laugh... he loved it, kept it, did a dance for us, and now is gay and dances for us and his own BF.

Sometimes they dance together.

But we get charged T_T

OHMYGAWD.
That stripper pole thing reminded me that boyfriend once had to help his mother install one in her room. He said it was quite disturbing and that he hates talking with her cause she gets personal over everything.
OHOHOH! like one time, i was over there and he was wearing a pair of his skinny jeans and his mom turns to him and goes, "Your dick is to big to be wearing those things. go change."
D=
That is that face I made. I made an even funnier one when his mom found out he had his ** pierced.it was crazy.
Anyways!

I really enjoyed the last two chapters and I can't wait til the next one, i bet it's gonna be great!

Love,
Faye Silo

This was a very good story.
Shame I had to read it twice because the first time round nothing sank in because of the mental image of lether pants and dancing Axel. Yus, I'm a perv...

-saved to faves-

Ah, I love your Axel XD he's such crack, without really being so. I have to wonder if Xiggy's shock was from the /wrongness/ of it all or from nearly splooging in his pants at the thought of Axel getting freaky with his 'brother' *amused* Oh, he's such a sly dog :D Will be waiting anxiously for the next update!

i think that would be the kinkiest thing to do is install a stripper pole in your room... so kinky that it's actually one very interesting idea XD

can't wait for the next thrilling installment xD

:D Everyone needs a stripper pole at least SOMEWHERE in their house!


xD; Oh my.

:D Can't wait for last chapter!