  Iskandri 2008-11-11 . chapter 1love it! keep up the great work!
the trailer was such a fabulous idea, it's why i added this story to my faves before i even read it |
| zutara-is-tru-luv 2008-10-21 . chapter 4 Awesome story...I've seen the trailer over at Live Video, and it is THE **. Can't wait for the rest...hopefully they'd come soon! |
| deekaygee 2008-10-21 . chapter 4 Nice chapter! I have a question, is Toph going to be coming into the story soon? |
| Ava22 2008-10-21 . chapter 4 Great story! Really realistic and very much in character. I love your smooth and detailed writing, and I actually think it's a good thing you let things develop slowly. I hope you update soon (saw there are big gaps between your updates), can't wait to find out how things will develop further between Katara and Zuko and what the hell Cixi (or is she Azula) is doing to the capitol. |
| Cycochics321 2008-10-21 . chapter 4 Cool story! I love it! Can you have Toph acctually appear in the next chapter? Or the next is fine too. Please keep writing!
-Kiri |
| kairiyuna15 2008-10-21 . chapter 4 really cool chapter. I hope things heat up between katara and Zuko soon. i want to see more Zutara but i love the way the story's going. please upadte soon.:) |
| Literateur 2008-10-21 . chapter 4 All right, another update! :D
And poor Zuko. Nothing seems to go well for him, even now. The Sokka/Zuko interaction at the end was nice- what did happen to Toph, by the way?
Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| amber128 2008-10-21 . chapter 4 yay! finally an update!
I really like this story so far and i can't wait to see where you go with it |
| GroggyRae 2008-10-12 . chapter 3 You should very much continue this. It is a very realistic post-finale story, and I appreciate that it takes nearly all the couples into account. And the fact that you don't neccessarily paint Mai as the antagonist, but you just work with what we've been given in the series. And unfortunate situations just happen to continue to befall Zuko, Katara and Mai. Also, you have a plot, and the mystery you've presented thus far is intriguing since we have almost nothing to go on, they're basically kicking it but there is something going on in the background. And of course I love the Zutara, and it's not overly romantic Zutara. To me, this is the real Zutara, a very gradual, comfortable, friendship that simply grows with time. Keep up the good work |
| coldblossom 2008-09-29 . chapter 3 I'm really enjoying what you have so far. I am not a Mai fan, but you're making her too human for me to dislike her here (rats!). I love how gently Zuko and Katara are coming together, as well as the intrigue with Azula's death. Please update soon! |
| Casanova325 2008-09-19 . chapter 3 Hi...I think you'r story is really good...keep up the good work..;) |
| RicaNG 2008-09-08 . chapter 3 Fantastic! I;m look forward to Ch. 4 :) |
| amber128 2008-09-08 . chapter 3 oh, is Katara lying?? who was Mai really talking to?? (no need to answer, I'll just have to ponder the questions until the next chapter)
I love this story so far!
The plot is dynamic and you're always throwing in new twists. I can't wait for you to continue it! |
| CassRae 2008-08-30 . chapter 1 I am really enjoying this story so far :) waiting for more! |
| ChipFest 2008-08-28 . chapter 3 Heh. Awkward... -.-"
Poor Mai... and Aang, I guess. I suppose they are both going to get their hearts broken...hn
That sucks cos i kinda like Mai.
Great chapter (loved the length XD)!
Hope you cn update again soon!
Cheerio,
Chip~ |
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