Very sweet. I liked it.

oh that was good... keep going!

waah...really sweet ^_^

it was preety cute (o^_^o) i could feel your very exited making this.. *passes a jar of cookie* ^^ oh! and i noticed something.. yuuki used to call him ''onii-sama'' not onii-san
onii-sama shows more respect for addressing your big brother and someone you look up to.. thats all.. all in all it was awesome!!
are you gonna continue writing this?

PS: ep~! i didnt saw the oneshot word there~! gomen! but it would be nice to continue it ne? o^_^o about what happens when kaname decides to go.. hehe~!

It was pretty good! I just came out with my 1st VK fic today too! :D