i would love to be in an exceptance ritual with axel!! this story is cute in a way, and seriously, the axel/demyx pairing is actually pretty good. i would rather be in demyxs 'dope' clique then axels, i would just be more fun!! now i'm off to infiltrate more of your stories!!

I'm not normally a person to like this pairing.
But that was really good.
I liked it.
It was really quite amazing. AMAZED!

Love,
Faye Silo

i...pretty much have nothing to say. mainly because i don't...like this sort of fic. i mean, come on, i'm the president of Akuroku fans at my school! (i elected myself by the way. XD) i'm loyal! ...but sometimes i do enjoy Akudemy.. -snicker-

erm...i'm just a normal teenager and i'm reading this fic and i...nearly faint and nosebleed. X3 -cough- by the way, it's sorta Akuroku. Demyx is like a one-night stand...don't you think so? but still, i enjoyed it. XD you made Demyx so...demy. XP

Oohh, this was so well writen! While I don't really adore non-con, I love the way this whole thing was written. Dem is a doll, really. Great job, dear.

I have to say I didn't really like this one. But, having said that, I don't think it was anything you did wrong. Your writing was on top form as usual, nothing to complain about there. I think the reason I disliked it was down to personal preference. I don't really like AxelxDemyx nor did I really enjoy the plotline yet you still managed to wow me with your actual style and technique. I know it sounds a litte harsh to tell you I didn't like your story due to my own opinion but I just thought you might like to know. So thanks for putting your stuff out there for us to read and I look forwards to reading your future stories but this one just didn't do anything for me

aww haha Demyx is such a dork ;3 He should just learn to be himself XD
I really liked this fic though

You know I always support ur fics! This one was pretty great. Wish the lemon had been in there though. Loved the pairing even though i support Akuroku and Zemyx more, this was good! Keep up the writing, and GET BACK TO YOUR OTHER FICS!
Yep, I have been labeled so many things!
~Kriss

It was actually really interesting! I don’t normally read the Axel/Demyx stories, but I think I might check more of them out after reading this one.