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twilightdork13 2008-12-02 . chapter 1
Very descriptive and in character. I absolutely love it. Jasper is one of my favorited characters as well, so that fact made me enjoy this all the more.
Continue writing, I'm sure the more pieces you post the better they will get!
Again, very well written and creative. I really did enjoy it.
Rose Muto 2008-11-22 . chapter 1
Very good, Jasper is my absolute favorite character, and it's not often that you get such a good look into his head like this.

It was written very well, and it felt like Jasper, which is a big accomplishment. I was listening to Harvey Two-face while reading this, and I must say that it certainly added to the effect.

I loved it! Drabbles are definitely some of my favorite things to read.
barb008 2008-10-29 . chapter 1
beautiful
GuestTypePerson 2008-09-22 . chapter 1
aww. that was awesome. i love stories from jasper's point of view! there are not enough of them!
ninnui 2008-07-31 . chapter 1
Made me smile in the end :) Thank you.
CowPox 2008-07-24 . chapter 1
I sure am glad you posted this one. This was really deep, and I'm trying not to sound like an idiot saying that. I truley loved it.
Livy Alice 2008-07-01 . chapter 1
Jasper's always been my favorite too, so to read something like this BY him...well, not many people do it.

THIS WAS AMAZING. It flowed nicely (always important to me) and it was very... Jasper.

Very good.

-Livy Alice
Llama Mama23 2008-06-24 . chapter 1
Nice job! You captured Jasper's character excellently!
wingedspirit 2008-06-20 . chapter 1
well that was very very good and I like Jasper too.
Dying2Live4evr 2008-06-18 . chapter 1
That. Was. Amazing!
i loved it and it sounded so much like something that jasper WOULD say. ^^
ilovealexrider 2008-06-18 . chapter 1
Really good, it was nice to see from jasper's pov for a change.

ilovealexrider
MALIANTIS 2008-06-18 . chapter 1
Fantastic job! Jasper happens to be one of my favourite characters too! I'd like to commend you on one thing - you're very perceptive. I admire that. It would be nice to have more writers like you. The type that works inside the mind of the characters rather than just go by herd instinct. Good job and keep up the great work! :-D
DDofEve 2008-06-16 . chapter 1
That was beautiful. Amazing what being around love, true love, does for us. And with vampires, everything being so much more intense, Jasper's pov was very wisely written, as far as you went with it, from the human nature standpoint.

Well done! I'm glad I got the alert from you! YAY!
edwardrocksmysocks 2008-06-16 . chapter 1
Wow, this was really great! Such deep thoughts! I love Jasper too...he's such a mystery! Keep writing! You are great at it!
puppyqueen14 2008-06-16 . chapter 1
I love Jasper. Getting inside his thoughts was really neat. This is really good!
~Lisa
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