Nice story, I'm glad I came across it. You did a good job on the characterization of the canon characters and I also enjoyed your original characters as I could see them being in the real show. I also thought you did a good job with little things, like the cheesy jokes Ben and Kevin say when they are fighting and stuff and with things like them thinking salamanders are lizards and Gwen correcting them and explaining they are amphibians and that they have no outer or middle ears etc. I appreciated those little things :) There were a few typos here and there but not so many that I couldn't bare to read the story so that's good too. Overall, it was a good story, thanks for taking the time to write it. A sequel might be cool, but the ending wasn't necessarily bad so if you don't get to one it won't be a huge deal. ^_^

OMG seriously that was like the best ben 10 story on fan fiction! great job!

Wohoo! New update, and now I'm happy. Write the next story for this or update Whole New World, which ever you do I'll wait for it. Cause I'm just annoyingly patient with stories, that and I'd be one to talk. I rarely update a story more than once a month.

Gwevin shippers UNITE! Ghost Dragon out.

I actually cried! But I'm happy that Kevvie didn't die..

and the kiss/die/go back to normal scene is/was so cute!

AW
that was a sweet chapter!
I luvved the whole story! youre a wonderful writer!

i loved this story! great job!

It really did feel like it was from the show all the way through. I particularly liked how Ben talked sense into Mito, it reminded me off episodes like Be-knighted. Whenever you feel like a sequel, we'll be here.

Awesome update like always, is that the ending or no? I'm just wondering bercause you were talking about a possible sequel? ^_^
~Tala~

AWESOMENESS! I was so mad at Cassie, but I loved Kevin's screw-ups over her name! I can't wait for you to update the story!^_^

i can't wait to read more! poor gwen!

Aw, a double whammy: the Gwevin action is starting to heat up a bit on Kevin's side, and the Bevin friendship got some spotlight, too! So sweet^^ Now all they have to do is find Gwen, and THEN it'll be perfect!

...but if, and ONLY if, you UPDATE THIS STORY SOON PLEASE!

Wow that was a really good story!! Please update soon, I just love the Kevin/Gwen/Cassie drama! Its fabulous!! Great Job!

Awesome update once again please update it soon ^_^
~Tala~

Aww...what a mix of Aww and whoah.
Aww for the cute Gwevin moments...and the awesome reference to Kevin's debut episode. Loved it..especially Kevin's inability to discuss feelings.
Whoah for the cliffhanger and the Gwen Beastie...can't wait for part 4!

Nice one. I must say, I'm hooked on this story.

Real acting characters, possible situations, good plot. That's what I like in a story, and that's what you've created here. Can't wait for the final chapter!