Excellent job! I loved it. You managed to capture all the charm and personality of the couple with this oneshot. I was laughing really hard at the end when Kevin and Gwen were talking about naming the kid. Good job!

great story so kool
ps... u arent the only one giigleing at how much a dork kevin izz lol right? peaceout dude!

i really like this one its so cute and natural for them ...im still stewing over the ep 15 "alone with you" how long is man of action going to hold off the kiss halloween? christmas? new years? cynco de mayo?? yes im exadrating hm someone could write a fic for all four of thoes...i just had a really briliant idea ...runs away...!

I love it! Don't they end up having twins in the end of Ben 10? Devlin and Jaylyn? I love it so much! The argument at the end was so funny! Are you adding more chapters!Man, I thought she was pregnant! lol, great writing!

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Ah, so cute! I keep having daydreams about what Kevin and Gwen would be like if they had a family. I imagine Kevin might get in trouble with Gwen more often than their kid would, (i.e.: teaching him to sneak cookies out of the jar and stuff) hehe.

At the same time, I can also imagine him having that attitude about kids. The only feasible reason I can think of for him to say 'yes' to kids is that he would have a real family again after his parents disowned him, and he'd have a chance to give his child the same love his own parents denied him after they learned about his powers (like if he/she inherited any powers, Kevin would understand and accept him/her). Good job :)

i really liked d story u should rite a sequel if u didnt already

omg, that's so funny! :D I appreciate you separating the serious side from the humor side.

(I love the story!!


Ur #1 hyper active author in training!

Aww! How cute! I think it is pretty funny how all the cousins have names that rhyme. lol ^^

Aw...this is really sweet. A bit of fluff and angst and comedy all in one! Great job! O=3

Hi! I just wanted to say that this is the best Gwevin story I've read so far! The end was especially cute and funny; good job!

That was cute! Good job :)

Good mix of drama and comedy all throughout. My favorite was the name-rhyming at the end, pretty funny.

And Kevin's reaction to that last line is to spit out his nonexistent-drink. Lol.

Great story. I'd love to see how Kevin does with kids. Au-ish to the Ken 10 episode, I mean.

Love,
Anya