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DestinyManifested 2007-09-22 . chapter 14
It's been almost a year! UPDATE PLEASE!!
FireSenshi2 2007-05-06 . chapter 15
I can't wait to read more of your story!
PurpleRose44 2007-03-25 . chapter 15
I love your story! I had no idea it was updated but i'm very happy it was. Hope you update some more soon!
LadyAkina 2007-02-22 . chapter 15
How could you just stop there? It was getting really good too! Please UPDATE!

-Baby K
imanif 2007-02-02 . chapter 1
great chemistry btw characters. lots of action! 100% if you finish
adilene 2006-12-29 . chapter 15
i love this story its so interesting and creative keep up the good work =] hope u get it done quick cuz i cant wait to read what happens lol bye
dizziified 2006-12-06 . chapter 15
Wow, just wow. I have no idea why this fic doesn't have at least a thousand reviews by now. You have a very good, solid writing style and the plot flows very nicely. I was up all night reading this and I must say: good work. This is the best fic I've ever read, hands down. Do update soon ;)
Venus_goddess 2006-11-29 . chapter 15
Incredible writing for a draft. It's unfathomable (to me) what your final draft will look like. Your exploration of their future had me reading some passages over and over again because they were so relavent to our current society and the pathway it seems to be taking. Usually I don't like to read fanfics with other characters but your character development of Rose and Kalkia is so rich and indepth that I couldn't help but be drawn into their development rather than the characters in SM world. It's as though they are the actors and the other character are but a stage for them to act upon. I really enjoyed your perspectives on Endymion and Serenity. As surprised as I was with the events of Enclave 6 incident, it really made me realize that the difference was SM's morality which made SM human more than a weapon. I couldn't stop reading all the wonderful chapters that you gave us. I hope that there's only more to come but hopefully in the next couple of months instead of the next couple of years.
Fantasia 2006-11-28 . chapter 14
This fic is a seriously good epic. I never really thought that I'll see a continuation to it after the first few chapters came out a few years back. Hence, it was a very pleasant surprise to find a update a few days back... and what an update! 10++ lengthy beautifully written chapters!! Both you and Kayla Chavi have worked on it so much and written it so very well. Wonderful story... one of the best of the best of the BEST I've ever read. Kalkia and Rose are really great characters, btw. Reminds me of both authoresses of this story. :) I fell in love with the beautiful personalities and great character development given to them.

It would be a sad waste if this story will not be carried on. Please do. :)
iluvboys 2006-11-27 . chapter 15
omg its great cept alot confuses me n no offense but th beggining was ebtter n it egts worse but ya id help u/work w u w/e but i suck at writing, soz but plz go on asap
DestinyManifested 2006-11-27 . chapter 15
WoW! @.@ This is some friggin AMAZING writing. I am so awed and so in to this story- thanks for the update. I just spent the better part of today doing a lot of rereading and I love how the characters are developing (But I still loathe Zunzite). KEEP IT UP!! ^.~
gflame16 2006-11-26 . chapter 15
Ah soo many chapters! I was so excited to see them all. I don't even know what to say but keep up the amazing work. I love all the nuances of each character and especially the development of Serenity, in particular. THe morality issue is really interesting.
There's a million other things I love but its just too much to say!Also, it was so sad that Ami had to die.
This story is just so complex and part of me just itches to know all the answers, the twists, and see how it ends...but part of me wants to see what happens in between, as well! With that said, I should be off to bed, and I have my fingers crossed for more speedy updates...haha. Thanks again for writing a great story and I hope to see more great stuff soon. =)
gflame16 2006-11-26 . chapter 10
I'm really glad that you're updating this! This is a great AU SM story that has a complex and engaging plot and great characters. It's one of the best stories I've read out there, and I want to read more!! Any idea how many chapters there will be??

Update soon! =)
DestinyManifested 2006-11-20 . chapter 2
Where'd ya go? I loved this fic, I wish you'd finish it
sereNendy 2006-07-31 . chapter 6
hey, this story is labeled complete, but i doesn't seem like they are. i really like this story and i was wondering if u were going to write more?
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