You are a really good writer and I hope you make another chapter. Also, I was wondering if you could read my story. It's not very long. It's called A Light in the Dark. But when you get to the NARUTO page click on characters and choose Itachi U. It should be on the first page. In case you're interested.

hey. ^_^ you're totally cured.

1.) I love how you wrote itachi- it was not to OC and whiny or whatever. It is so believable that itachi would do such things and do such things.

2.) itachi is love. what?

3.) i love the writing style, first person and dramatic (is that the right word? i'll come back when i think about the right word.)

4.) you know this is coming, i want itachi ALONE. LOL.

great job!!

~sam

Wow,, reaLLy g0od oNe. wHat hAppEnEd t0 SayAka??
Please makE s0mE m0re 0uT oF tHis.
I likEd it,,
s0,, that's all,,..
BYE!^_^