Very interesting! I've never read this pairing before. It was very well written. And I liked a lot of your imagery and descriptions. One question, are the girls still in school? I didn't think so, but whatever, it works still. This was a great, please keep writing.

That was lovely and sweetly shiver-inducing. I'm a definite fan.

This was really sweet. Your writing style is really poetic.

I LOVE this. Thank you so much for sharing. Your writing style is so poetic.

warm regards,
dark-hearted rose