aww...i cried

This story is beautiful. I cried throughout the wole thing. Amazing work.

Damn the tears you have caused me...

Love it love it. Couldn't love it more.

it cant end here!
no

THANKS TT^TT, i'm crying now, it was a beautiful sad story though

I am so very close to crying.
That was amazingly well written, though. Keep it up. Also, ** awesome song choice. Props, man. ;)

Oh, christ.

That was /sad/, man. That was real sad.

Still, though. It was real good...I think you did a great job conveying the whole meaning of the thing. Your word choice was eloquent, and real pithy, too. No wasted phrases here.

Excellent.

But sad as hell.

Beautifull story. And a sad ending T_T.
It was very good writing ;).

;__; That was really sad. I feel so bad for Kyle. *sniffles* And well, for Stan as well, but ya know.

no! Stan!

why did you make Kyle curse him? that's so sad...almost made me cry. seriously. (yes I know that I'm a baby, leave me alone) but, since it *did* almost make me cry, that means that it was very well written in order to draw any emotion from me. so kudos for that. nice job.

Amazing story. By the end of it, my eyes started to water. Keep it up.