That was simply amazing. Your portrayal of the characters was excellent and adorable. Keep it up!

YAY!! MORE STORY!! I simply adore this story and couldn't be more thrilled that it's been updated. And I understand the pain of no ideas. It's rather tankish...

Great chapter!!

Rogue

ROFLMAO!
XD wow! the bluberry thing made me die laughing!

=]

i totally love this story! please update soon

Yay! Thanks for making this more then a oneshot. I'm really glad you did too. I love the way you show Haji and Saya relationship.

This story is intriguing.

And by the way, it is interesting to see that Haji likes to sleep and to eat - both things he is actually unable to do in the anime due to being a chevalier..

Woo Hoo!! I was mentioned. BOOYAH! Well, that was wonderful, stupendous, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, perfect, lovely, b-e-a-u-tiful, and well, I adored it. Haji and Saya with no chiropteran influence makes me all warm and fuzzy on the inside. You are an amazing author, and I want, no, need you to update this. After all, I got you your reviews, so now it's up to you... Are you up to the challenge?

Rogue

OMFG! HAWT! *drools, forbidden foster sibling love*

hahaha :) nice! and um. if there are no chiropterans then that means saya wouldnt need to age so she wont meet kai and riku. ryt? :(
also, is diva gonna appear anywhere in the story :|

very good!!
thanks for making it not a oneshot!! ^_^

Yippie! Chapter two *runs like a crazy and falls xD* ok. I don't have any problems with the new storyline I actually love it. I'm so happy this is no longer a one shot I can tell by now it's going to be amazing!... so far it is amazing ^^ keep writting please or I will not be able to sleep xD hahaha. Oh man I could kiss you or even send you flowers x.x

See? I told you that I can get you reviewers!! Now! tell me when you'll update!

Rogue12158

yay please change it to a full story! I would really enjoy reading about Haji and Saya realationship developing. Love your stories

aw i really liked it i hope you can make this into a full story that would be really cool

I adored the idea of Haji being adopted before Saya was born *o* I hope you continue this fic because it would be amazing if you turn it into a whole story. The relationship between them should be a lot stronger since the grew up together as siblings. It's official, I love your writting so please keep doing it