Whoa, creepy. The first time I was like phew. The second time I was like "wut!" I totally didn't expect that! Good job.

wow
very random
i'd like to see it furthered though,

well written. :D

Wow, don't know if I like it or not but this is good.

I don't know why but this just seemed to make sense to me

Candy, I say this because I care about you
GET SOME HELP,
nice story by the way.

W-w-whoa...! That was interesting. Were did you get your inspiration? The show or the comics? I really like it. Keep it up!


Deu Sa!