 Elfanyan 2008-09-14 . chapter 1An interesting start to a story that in my book can do no wrong considering what the plot is. The tone is rather sad yet not in a overwhelmingly negative manor but in a rather melancholy way, of past tears but future bliss. Character are introduced not in a fully fledged detailing way but in rather, 'they are here, but you really don't need to know them' way. The reader assumed upon that they know what exactly they are in for, a rather lovely changer from some that insist on explaining everything.
All in all a very promising start to a story, that so far has more than lived up to that. And only the first chapter no less.
Add some chapters soon please, I would be hard pressed to find a story that has perked my interest quite the same way this one has! |