aw! j/a are one of my fav couples. well they all are but who cares? lol

*claps* Nice job

Hee hee nice way to start a new life. 8-) they are so cute!

You're love of Jasper is evident in this piece. How can anyone not love Jasper?!

Very sweet and romantic. Nicely written.

This was very well written.

Excellent Job!! Totally Brilliant! XD

I love it!

that was exquisite!

This was so beautiful! You captured their spirits so well. :)

absolutely beautiful! are you going to continue? (i hope, i hope, i hope!)

Aww, that was so sweet and extremely well written! :D It's just a pity that it's so short ;_;

i loved this story so much! I think it was brilliant from Jaspers POV :D

WOW!
That was really good!
Keep up the good work!

Very sweet and well written story. I think it really fills in the missing blanks of the beginning of Alice and Jasper's relationship.

Wow!
George

Aww, this was a nice short blurb. I love Alice and Jasper, they seem like such an interesting couple and I like how you incoporated Jasper's past into this.