when's the next chapter coming up? is it about adam & jesse's relationship like father-son?

please update soon!

great story, i just read all the chapters. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Jesse will be okay and they find him and Adam soon. Please Update.

Awesome update can't wait to read more, please update it soon ^_^
~Tala~

Awesome Mutant X story can't wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Please update it soon ^_^
~Tala~

you took of his beautifull beautifull hair *cries*
*goes sitting in a baby position in the corner going back an forth, thum in the mouth*
great story though * continue crying*

Great chapter, can't wait to see how Jesse gets out of this one and how the others find him and Adam. Please update soon.

awesome! Thanks for the little dedication!! I'm ecxited for more! Great chapter! Tootles!

*gasp*

*inserts cheesy music*

n the plot thickens...

i want..more!

please?!

glad tos ee a fic with adam involved.hope theres more trouble for them both,

merci pour ce nouveau chapitre

hey...late reply but i only jus got to reading...(had my finals...it sucked really bad) but enuff abt me...
now on to jesse!*rubs hands with glee*

o.k...let's have the breakdown...
i know they want jesse already...u told me that like...
oh...x times already?!
n then, u made him bald (i do find shaved-head guys sexy...not all but some...*sighs*)
n u got him to strip (oh..e metal imagery,it's torture i tell u!) n shower
n then strapped down (oh e things i could do if i could lay my hands on him!)...!

so now u got me interest pigued.

what's going on already?!arrggh! it's mind-boggling!

so please!

put me out of my misery?

Please don't abandon the story once you've started to write it:)

great! i cant wait for more!

*rocks back and forth*

must
have
update...
must
have
update...

no but seriously, I get that life's a hassle and this is a side hobby
BUT DOES KILLING ME HAVE TO BE A PART OF IT?!