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dreamweaver34 2008-05-22 . chapter 2
I like it! I always thought that the TV show and the movie left out too many people. I'm especially glad that Betsy is there as she is one of my favorite characters in the comics. I'm also glad that you're (seemingly) pairing her with Angel. Anyway, please update soon and again great story!
lets just call me. 2008-04-12 . chapter 2
pyro belongs with wanda!and i like the story, by the way :)
gambitfan85 2008-04-12 . chapter 2
Hm, the choice between Wanda or Amara is a tough one so I'll leave it up to you. I'm okay with either so it doesn't bother me which way you choose to go with them. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
freegirl 2008-04-11 . chapter 2
Hi. Um, just FYI, this review is meant to cover both chapters you've written so far. So, I like what you have so far, although you may wanna ease up on Pyro's accent a bit. It seems pretty thick, and in the actual show I remember it as being milder. Um... I like how you put Angel with the X-Men, with your explanation at the beginning, 'cause he's one of my all-time favorite characters. I also noticed with some satisfaction that Psylocke and Angel will be spending a lot of time together... Heehee. :) An enormous plus on your story is the absence of foul language! One thing that really ticks me off is when people swear in their writing. I mean, it doesn't add anything, and some people (like me) will even stop reading an otherwise decent story purely because of bad language. High five for cleanliness! Anyway, I'm excited to see the plot unravel. So, keep up the good work and please update soon!
gambitfan85 2008-02-25 . chapter 1
Sigh. Am I going to see Phoenix blow up the school because Emma's going to try and steal Cyclops away? I just know it. LOL. Anyway, interesting start to the story.
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