*sniffles.*

Aw!
They are too cute~! I cannot wait for Breaking Dawn!

That was heart wrenching
It was sweet that he hugged her. I could picture this in the book once again. =)

This was brilliant. I just wish it were longer, Thank you.

Loved it, very sweet and intimate.

Very nice little fic. I really enjoyed reading it. :) The last two lines were terrific! Great job!

~Cat~

That was unbelievably sad. I mean I could feel all the sadness that Bella had with leaving something forever, something that she didn't really think about.

I love that you had her not doubting her decision to be with Edward but just sad about the things that she would leave behind.

The emotion was overwhelming in this story. You did such a wonderful job.

This was beautiful!

Just found this, great work, beautifully written :)

I liked EVERYTHING! This was really awesome. Nice work! :)

It was a great story. I can imagine it all in my head. It's absolutely wonderful. I have also read many of your other stories and have fallen in love with them. I admire how you write things that many of us have read in Edward's point of view. And like how you have the right words used in the original book. I encourage you to keep writing.

That was incredibly sad, but it was wonderful. I really liked reading it:)

COOL!

That was very very good.
With the imagery and Bella's heartfelt feelings, you could visualize and understand it all perfectly.
Sweet ending too, it was a great way to end it. :)

I really liked it. I thought you ha a really nice contrast of how sad she was to be leaving everything behind but also how happy she was to spend eternity with Edward.

"I couldn’t bring myself to agonize too achingly over the prospect of an alternate future because the prospect of seeing Edward’s face next to mine for an eternity was so bright that no other path could hold a candle to its glow."

I really liked that line because I hope in the midst of how sad she's going to be feeling, that she remembers all she's gaining.