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Reviews For: Smile of a Butterfly
Abysilityy 2008-08-07 . chapter 1
Awh, so sweet :)
Again, you never cease to impress! Great job capturing their characters
Lupi Loop 2008-06-05 . chapter 1
Heya!
Just found this via your profile (dunno why but I've not had any alerts for your stuff recently), anyway, it's very good, and even though it's not a pairing I usually like (coz I'm such a big ZeLink fan LOL) I really liked this. Great as usual!
roxas-kh 2008-02-14 . chapter 1
Haha wow... I've actually imagined once about Link and Peach being together because I liked to make up stories when I play this game sometimes, but most of the time I imagined a love triangle between Link x Zelda x Marth. Sad huh? But oh well. I had fun. This was good and I liked it. Great job!
Midnight Crystal Sage 2008-02-09 . chapter 1
Love Love Love!

*faved*
PrincessPeachandDaisy 2008-02-08 . chapter 1
I really like this story, alot. I love the intro and how you've really put this together. This is going straight to my favs.
Monkeyman88j 2008-02-07 . chapter 1
OBJECTION! Sorry, I just wanted to do that. That was really good, just like every other story I've read of yours. So... Good job keeping the standards up!

P.S. Your Zelda stories are part of my inspiration for writing.
lisa baby 2008-02-06 . chapter 1
cute! i love link/peach! they're the cutest couple ever! maybe i'll look that your link/zelda stories too, i'm open minded! :P
Tripod Baby 2008-02-06 . chapter 1
Very good descriptions of Peach, and they way Link narrated was flawless. They were both so in character, which you definitely know how to do, even when they're out of character. You're THAT good. :)

-Tripod Baby
Twilight Queen 2008-02-06 . chapter 1
that was cute! can't wait for circles! Keep it lovely too! ^_~
boardrider66 2008-02-06 . chapter 1
A very nice take on Peach's character from Link's eyes. It fit her rather well, and you got Link down to a pin too! Another nice romance fic... but it ain't no Link/Zelda. ;p

Woah, woah! When and where are you announcing Circles' release date?! Is it gonna be on your blogspot or what?
crystalicios 2008-02-06 . chapter 1
I love the way you made Link capture Peach's personality, because when you're in love with somebody you always notice their smile, and when you're infatuated with somebody you always see the good in them.

In this one-shot, you managed to capture how Link saw Peach; a goddess, somebody who he'd easily be able to worship. So kudos to you on that one!

Umm... Only a couple things really held me at attention. One was that you used the word "enigmatic/enigma" a little too often. Perhaps if you had used enigma a little while after, I'm sure it wouldn't have seemed weird to me. But that's a small thing, and I bet I'm the only one that was bothered by it.

Also... I don't think the word, "whispy" is an actual word. Perhaps you meant "wispy"? or "whispery"?

Ahh... Well, anyway, that was the only error I could find. Other than that, it was a really beautiful oneshot, and the way you wrote it also fit with how you portrayed Link in the story. The title also fits.

It was short and sweet. :) Good job! And good luck on your future writings!
sweethonesty524 2008-02-05 . chapter 1
AH, you GOTTA stop not letting me in on your oneshot stuff! But on the other hand, I love being surprised. And beta reading kinda ruins the newness for me, ya know? So I guess it's not all bad. XD

Even though it's not Zelink, it was a nice quick read. You got Peach down pretty well here; experimenting with no dialogue again? Geez, you can make any pairing happen. 'Specially Zelink, but you know all about that. ;p

OMG, when's Circles coming out!!??!? TELL ME NOW!

PS: "Keep it lovely", "tickles your fancy"... I love your lingo, SJ :)
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