i put this on my favorites, because it is ADORABLE! :D

that was preaty cool i loved it

Great insight! Love it :)

Your character writing is impeccable. I usually shy away from students that write because of their limited time, but I was taken in by all of your one-shots and now I will be a fan of yours for as long as you write 'twilight'.

Thank you.

Okay, when I first skimmed through the Twilight fics a bit ago it appeared that the majority were AU, and that's all good and well but I love these types of stories and you are quite an amazing writer, it feels like I'm reading the book.

I loved reading another one of yours from Edward's POV. You really have him down, I think anyways.

I loved how you went through this part of the story and showed how Edward had to be feeling. As I was reading it I could feel his angry and fear of what could happen to Bella.

Great job.

This is another of my favorite moments in the book - when Edward is so obviously jealous. I liked how you captured EPOV. I don't know that Stephanie herself could have done any better!

damn, you are GOOD.
It's so detailed, and really reflects on the emotions he was experiencing - i likee.
i hope you do more one-shots like this.
~purplecow1225

Aw, I love Edward he's so damn sweet! This was awsome, :) .

great! i really like reading stories from edward's point of view. i think stephanie tries to compensate somewhat for our lack of insight into his thoughts by making him admit to a lot of his emotions, but nonetheless i love stories like this and i think you nailed the character perfectly!

I liked this. I love Edward. And I already hated Jacob, so I know where Edward is coming from.

I always just thought of what was really going through Edward's head at that time. And I must say you totally hit on the spot. That's what i was thinking about! LOL This is like one of my favorite parts in the book! Like I've said in my other review for your other story your an amazing writer and I just love how you showed how Edward was thinking! LoL

Amazing work here. The way you've displaced Edward's emotions makes the scene that took place in Eclipse more understandable.

You've got a wonderful gift for capturing the correct tones and emotions of these characters, especially Edward. And that's not only in this story, but in the others you have.

Keep up the excellent work and continue writing amazing stories. (More from Edward's perspective, please. ^_^)

This is a fabulous fanfic. You nailed Edward's POV. Even though his overprotective nature often lends itself to near disasterous conclusions (like it almost did in this scene), I could also feel his overwhelming love for Bella. I think you did a great job keeping with the rhythm of his language as well. Edward has a particular cadence in his speech some writers miss. You jumped in and hit it completely! I can't wait to read more of your work.

Wow, this was a really good edwards pov, i thought you were stephenie meyer herself! Im going to kill two birds with one stone in saying that i also love your story new kiss...edward is so cute even though he sulks, sullen cullen, hehehe...and i was wondering if can you please do the scene from eclipse, where bella sees the whole pack in wolf form from ed pov...i think you would do an amazing job on that!Your an amazing writer, and i cant wait for more oneshots from you, they are so adorable!

This is really good. It sounds like Stephenie wrote it herself! Awesome job. -favorites-