I like it!

Wow!! This is great! Thanks for writing!

Love the "Princess Bride" reference.

*The priest droned on and on; Eric was very much aware that his bride, his Ariel, was extremely close to him, and was currently being married to him, and only heard brief phrases: “matrimony”, “bond”, “salad spinner”, “love, honour, and obey”.*

I forgot to tell you how much I liked that line. Congrats on your invite to that site.

I absolutly loved this story. Your writing style is very entertaining. I especially loved incorporation of the Princess Bride priest. It made my day!

Aww...sweet!

I'm of two minds regarding this chapter. The writing was, as usual, wondeful, but it felt much too short. More build-up before the wedding, maybe even amounting to a chapter or two wpuld have been very welcome. I did like it, but I really wish there had been more story TO like.

Beautiful job! I really enjoyed this story and hope to read the other companion piece soon. :) Loved it.

As I read this I noticed there was a Little Mermaid ad at the bottom. Awesome.

aww. cute.
~Mel

This is so cute! Is this going to be an ongoing story, or will it end in the same timeframe of the film?

lovely story! please update soon!

The Princess Bride pun killed me XD

I loved this! Great great job. Very sweet chapter... update soon!

"The figure’s feet were bare, and—

She had feet."

I LOVED that line! Nicely done, nicely done! You did very well in the first scene, I think. The way you narrate is perfect in describing somebody waking up and regaining his bearings.

The second half is funny, how Ariel his Eric. Haha! Hilarious without going over the top. Great job!

Aiyayayay the story's ending. That's...a good thing, but a sad, too. ^_^