I hope you are going to continue. You have my interest... ^_^

pwease update this...its really good. i mean it.

Argh, I love it! Great writing, so much potential for future awesomeness, can't wait for more! I loved reading the first chapter, please update soon!

I've been checking to see if this one was ever updated but (sadly for me) no...

I think this is well written - nice tight plot, almost everyone so far seems pretty much in character but there's room for OOC action as well, which can be good.

I like the idea of Wolfram becoming Murata's guard and the possibility that his power will grow stronger/more focused.

I kind of hope that if you do continue this, once Yuri 'sees the light' and gets together with Wolfram, that he'll be able to continue as the Sage's guard (at least till the threat is defeated).

If it's ten years later, wouldn't Greta be in her late teens now? Because of the difference in time passage, I realize it's possible that Yuri isn't 25 yet, but Greta doesn't go to earth, so she'd age in the demon kingdom way. Just wondering because she could be having her own suitors by now.

Speaking of which - in 10 years of supposed not noticing/pushing Wolfram away, might there not be other people interested in a lonely, seemingly unwanted fiance? People Yuri might have cause to be jealous of?

please update soon

Hey! You HAVE to finish this story lol. I am so hooked and it sounds really good, I like Wolfram alot hes my fav. I like your organization so far, its really good and easy to follow

I really like where this story is going. The idea of Wolfram being the High Guard sounds interesting. Yuuri noticing Wolfram's absence first and Greta noticing where Wolfram was standing was a nice touch.

Wow this is a really good chapter. I felt so bad for Wolfram and I was about to cry when he was talking to Murata. Please please keep writing this story. It is so promising.

I like it. Can't wait to see what happens after Wolfram leaves.

continue please, too bad its not murata/ wulfram, I like it ^.^

omg! itz realli good so far, i would love u to start the 2nd chapter already =) keep on going~

Excellent, excellent beginning - I love the way that you're writing Wolfram and your Murata is likewise excellent. I can't wait to see how it develops! ^_^

it's good. :)

OMG! i really like it! hope you update soon... i wish it was MurataWolfram though...

I defintely like how the story is progressing and thank you for mentioning that the relationship between Wolfram and Murata will be platonic since when others do it they never give a warning where I end up reading a pairing I don't quite enjoy. The idea behind this story is new and interesting so please do continue.

P.S. I love H/D pairing they're so good together. Just thought you know XD.