It's...weird. Immediate love between Naruto and Sasuke. OOC don't you think?

Yeah... It's not the best thing I've ever read, but it wasn't the worst, I suppose. Could use some work. The plot seemed kind of undeveloped and almost too pointless.

It was okay.

"Oh yes, different people have different ways they like it. Them. Different ways they like them." i really liked that part it was just so funny. LOVED IT ! SO FUNNY AND CUTE. at first i though t that they were actually at a fruits stand and all. good thing you put that note at the end if not i would still be lost. !GENIUS!