hmm... not so sure that this was very... filling for a lack of better words. but i still licked it anyway!! :)

hmm... i pet dusk would be nice to have, but then again, so would any faithful servent... like this so far... we'll have to see about the rest though... jk ;)

different, but i liked it... but what i enjotyed even more was a little line at the bottom... "when life gives you lemons...make yaoi"

i loved it! axel is awesome! i would love to have axel as a teacher...lmao :)

Ek! I absolutly loved that! ((Sorry it took me so long to read, school and all that fun stuff *rolls eyes*))

Anywho, awesome fic, loved it. Can't weait to check out other stuff by you! Keep up the awesome writing!

Wonderful story, and I can feel all the pain Poxas is made of.

Sorry this review is a little late, but I don't usually go into this pairing much. Actually, truth be told, this is the first AkuRoku I've read. Despite being my first AkuRoku, it isn't my first yaoi and I think this was a pretty good one. To tell you the truth, some of the parts got me a bit confused, but I worked them out...I think.

"When life gives you lemons...make yaoi"
Yes, I SO agree with you here. Yaoi is good for the soul...

That was so amazing, like always.

it was a beautiful triple shot! xD wonderful yaoi, teacher student, expilcit type yaoi! xD
great job!

Ah, it seems like more and more stories have lemons in them nowadays. xDD But I actually didn't mind this one. You did really good.

Coming from someone who could probably never write such citrus.. xD

Yeah! I saw the title and was all 'OMG. YOU'RE ** ME. :D'

Your stories are just love. Pure love. And much yum. Of course they're yum, it'd be like an apocalypse NOT to adore you and your stuff. D:

Urgh.. This review isn't anything like I wish it could be, but that's what happens with stuffy noses and lack of sleep.

Sheesh, I can't believe this is the end of the three-shot. D: I want it to go on-uh, even though I can't really see how it COULD continue beyond that point. xD It's just so perfect.

Heh. I'd never learn anything if Axel was my teacher. Except maybe how to stalk people a little better... But you're right, he does look like a harsh critique-er. Like Jay and Silent Bob almost. xD "Wtf is this **?" (Dogma? No? -phail-)

I remeber you from somewhere, but I don't know from where. Oh well.
I don't usually like AkuRoku pairings cause there are so freaking many!
But this is an exception, nice job!

Peace. Love. Kites.

Lovely work, as usual.

I like the fight scenes in these chapters since others I have read by other writers... Well, they're just not all too good. I like how there's real description in their movements, so you know exactly how they're attacking one another. And the whole part of Axel pinning Roxas against the wall like butterfly in the second chapter, I like that, too. And I like the idea of Roxas being the determined student and Axel being the teacher. I look forward to reading any further chapters if you make more^_^.

Oi! Come back here and finish this! XD

I like.