xTheTwilightPrincessx 2007-07-25 . chapter 1Aw, very cute story. Poor Tingle...he's not just some crazy old guy... |
Anna I. 2007-01-20 . chapter 1This was really enjoyable and really... well, cute. It made me want to illustrate it.
Y'know, if there was such a series as "The Legend of Tingle", this would make a very good first book/chapter. haha |
Lefty the Right-Handed Shark 2006-09-03 . chapter 1Very canonically incorrect... Yes...
Anyways, "they forgotten" should be "they had forgotten" or "they forgot". And "where said fireflies of legend were said to inhabit." You wrote "said" twice... Sounds weird. Too tired to say other stuff...
I liked it. Chiefly because Tingle is awesome! Made me laugh a couple of times, too. So good, methinks.
Crazymark. |
richawe5 2006-09-02 . chapter 1First review! *dances* Well, now the ending is truly incredible! Seriously, I was so moved when Tingle took out the picture of the Kokiri and put it under his pillow. *sheds a tear* :P Like I said on IGN, I really like this story. It's nice to see some insight into how Tingle came upon his obsession with faires; you came up with a great explanation! And you were very faithful to the character of Tingle. Hopefully other readers on ffn will be able to appreciate this. So again, great job! And see, just like I promised, you got a double comment from me by posting it on ffn and IGN! :P I also like your Team Tingle advertisement at the end. :P |
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