i was really thinking about going through and reviweing every chapter in both of these stories... but i am lazy o the fullest. but i just thought i' say that these are the best akuroku stories i've read so far!! keep up the good work!!

omfg! this fiv just took a turn from funny to horridly depressing...

very nice so far

i am so red. love this chapter. love your writing.

XDXD
"Shut up Demyx"
XD new reader! love it so far!

That was a really good story. Can you say drama? I look forward to readingmore of your works.

Love, Roxtrox7

::bawling:: God damn it... and I need to go to sleep now... WHY DID ZEXION HAVE TO DIE?! ;~; ::vows to ignore the call of KH2 when she wakes up in the morning/afernoon to finish reading this fic::

Okay, I had to make a comment on this chapter, just 'cause my thoughts amused me. XD

I don't blame Roxas for staring at naked Axel. Hell, who WOULDN'T wanna stare at a guy that hot? ::shot ded for being perverted::

I think that was the Roxas in me talking, BTW. XD

Nothing like awkward roleplaying XD
Great chapter, I liked that Axel was embaressed and not all pervy, its different.

Well so far I like this story. It's sort of refreshing to have Roxas and Sora not be best buddy brothers. Zexon smirking and asying the word "fancy", too priceless XD

I look forward to continuing reading this,
Love, Roxtrox7

wow this story has ALOT of reviews!!

I'm juts going to say I love this fic so much!!

WWAAH! AXIE-KUN NO! I love Axie-Kun...*snifle* don't hurt him!

*hit you on the arm* You scared me! For a while there i thought that Zexie had really died. I'm so glad that everyone is alright even there dad, because 1) I cant stand people dieing and 2) i think Roxas would have had some serious mental problems if he killed someone.

Love this chapie! For some reason it reminds me of the cake my freind had at her party last weekend, it had Axel on it. How cool is that a cake with Axel on it!

Oh. My. GOD.
That story was simply, indescribably AMAZING!
Especially the ending ((as in the last few chapters))
I was so torn up and so very, very sad at the end...

You capture emotions marvelously
I got such a vivid feeling when you described Roxas' emotions, any of them, that I was completely sucked into the story

On a side note:
I can't believe Zexion died!
I nearly cried
I might've teared up a bit, sadly...
[[it's really disappointing to me how emotional I can get while reading something]]
-sniffle-

Oh, and I have a favorite line from the entire story:
"...why does guilt hit everything else but the target...?"
THAT was magnificent
Pure literary ART!