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| leaving now 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseUm, pretty good, I found a couple of mistake in grammar wise,maybe look it over now! It's a while when you wrote it. |
| a proud geekfreak 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseouch, this Ehren seems like a bastard. I mean this was entertaining to read, but those children were little bastards. seriously, they are messed up. |
| Cookie 2006-07-14 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was cool... |