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| NexAngelus405 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseDr Kisugi was killed by Boogiepop before the Pillar of Light, so she shouldn't be asking Moroi about it cause it didn't happen yet. |
| E.P.O 2006-03-26 ch 3, | abuseAw... Moroi is as lovable as always, and I liked her theory on where the people in her head come from. Korosu is equally well written - putting snails on the anorexic's food was a stroke of genius - and the 'icky stuff' was well handled albeit somewhat predictable. All in all, great work. |