This is a beautiful poem. I love it. I didn't know you went to Fictionpress. I go there too, what's your pen name on that. Mine is RawkChick, take a look at some of my poems :)

This was really good. I love reading poetry, so I'll definetly remember to look you up when I feel like I need to read something with artistic talent. It sounds like you really thought about whta you were trying to say when you wrote this, a good characteristic (and one I need to work on I might add, lol). Most of my writting are really in the moment and impulsive. I'd also like to thank you for those great reveiws you gave me, I was dying for someone to read my stuff. THANK YOU! Anyway, don't give this up, you've got some great potential.

that was beautiful

This is a wondeful poem. To me it tells of the longing for answers of the afterlife, and God himself...ie. the magnificant light, aswell as Evil or Satan if you will...ie. veil of ember shadows. I may be way off but that is what I am taking from this. Well Done!!