i have witnessed my mother and older sister have seizures. how you described it...it made me think back to how i felt. this story is very good!

Wow, MAJOR unmitigated angst! You really love torturing the twins, don't you?! This was so sad at points...and so grim at others. Very well done - again! I'm reading your other story, "Half Blood" and they're both really well writ.

I just finished reading this story. I must say: it amazed me and made me want to cry. Keep up the good work and write more.

I really liked the story. Could you make a sequal to it or something? Perhaps something about Aragorn and Legolas?

Just wanted to say that this was an excellent story and I really enjoyed it. I loved the way you portrayed the twins and Elrond - keep up the good work!!

I just got back from my holiday and read this the whole way through again I'm so happy you finished I really like it.

ye my pc is being weird won't let me review chappie 10 so i'll review chapter 1 instead. great story, loved it, write more.

I really like this, it was a really cool way to end with that line. Please wite more stuff

I am also pleased with this story. Good work. I'm glad that the twins can get over with the incident, although I'm sure there're scars deep inside their heart.

Are you planning on writing another story soon? I'll support any story with more Elladan.

i loved that story.

Wow this story was soo awesome! You have to keep writing more stories! I loved it!

absolutely fantastic! i have been hooked on this story from start to finish, and i have enjoyed every moment. U are a fantastic writer, and i am so looking forward to your next story.

i love the way u've ended it. very good, and not sappy/cheesy. just the right note, with everything back to normal in Imladris. if you can class the twins' mischevious behaviour as 'normal' anyway...

many, many thanks! x

I loved this story. You did a great job writing it and I look forward to other stories from you.

oh man, that was a great ending. I loved it. well im supposed to be doing homework right now but i couldn't stop reading your story. great job

Yes it is me once again... hey look they have a spell check on reviews now... cool... now I might get reviews with decent level of spilling! Okay way of track. I loved your story as I've probably told you a million times now. Lovely sappy ending. I love sappy. Elrond is a typical father and I thought that was brilliant. He seems almost... dare I say it?... human! Did he have grey hairs in the film... I better go check that out? Maybe should should write a short piece on Erestor catching Elladan with his precious book! That would be good - for a laugh! Poor Erestor. Did he give the book a decent funeral? Well it was wonderful. Off to check out your new story. ~ Illeanah