In your AN // "Because it’s always nice to see someone so rotten go through a series of transformations to finally turn out all right in the end." // Lol, Joya! Speaking of *Draco*, are we? XD

Awesome, awesome fic. I love how bratty Ed is! And how after Su leaves, he rolls his eyes. XD I can just see him doing that. ;)

i am very amazed by your fic. i always wished that edmund and susan would interact more in both the movie and books. it just seems that realistically susan should be the one who can reason with ed, and you shone it very well in yours. bravo!

Nice one. But is this a oneshot?

I liked this, I could easily picture this as a missing scene from the movie. Good job.

Very nicely done. I liked that. And the whole bit about the omelets - nice touch.

Just Jill

I liked it! Good job!

Good story! Nice humor and dialog is realistic for characters. I like that you developed Susan and Edmund's relationship a bit more.

Oh Joya! You know I love your fics! It was very author-y. You should become a writer. I loved that you kept Edmund in character. Gah! I suck at giving reviews! I really liked it!

This was a great fillergap scene; there are hardly any stories that mainly feature Susan and Edmund. The characterizations were great. I liked Susan being sympathetic towards Edmund and how he shruged her off in the end.

I hope you will write more fics.

Oh gah, now that I know I don't have to register, I can leave a review here!

I love this take, Joya. It's really fantastic and touching. It's funny how people remember little things like omlettes. Heh. Wonderful job, sweetie!

Agreed, Edmund's a bad boy, which is why we all love him. Good fic!!

Wow! That was just excellent! Great job! Please write more!

I loved this!
You portrayed Edmund wonderfully
& the characterization is awesome.
This was fabulous!

Joya, this is SO nice. I love the whole mushroom thing and I love how he just says those things to shrug Susan off. Love it. Great job!

Ah, ambition... The sin by which angels fall. ^^ Yay for writing the fic!! I really liked it--and yay for Susan being sympathetic towards Edmund! Heaven knows he needed it.