What tiwst you have put into your story.

Just found your story an AU with several twist. So far so good.
How mean your queen sounds about eating humans insted of headbeast. Now that give me the chills.

Really good!
If I felt slightly sorry for the girl who got a gold, then she must not be a Mary-Sue. Well done.
Also well-characterised ulterior-motivey annoying people.
And...um...she seems not to be madly attached to her dragon, which is a fairly unique take.

oh, get you!

If I got down on my knees and begged would you update? Not since January have you added to this precious story! I think I shall have difficulties breathing! *gasp*
Sorry. But please do update.
(I don't mean to rush you - well, actually, I do)
-eminempern

That was a good story! Write more! Write more! You haven't updated for a long time! Well, I'm not sure how long it's been, but it's too long!
I keep trying to write dragonrider fics, but they never turn out good. Darn your talent!
Write more, please? *little dragon eyes*

'Spair, this was an excellent chapter, and if you don't write the third one I shall quit Yung!

...okay, I couldn't bring myself to do anything that dramatic, but you must write it! Before I go insane!!

Is this the end of Ophidia, then? I liked her the most. ;_;

Oh. Pretty.

Um, I can't really find anything to critique, so this was basically to tell you how glorious your story is and such. So yes...

A very solid start to what I hope will be a successful story. I'm extremely curious to see what you do with this ^.^

Bravo, very good. Just re-read.

*peers* I didn't know Anya had vestiges of sanity! Why was I not informed? Yeah... anyway...

.> Who? Me? Ought to be posting rather than reviewing things? Perhaps...

*gawks*

When did this open up? Man, I'm so out of the loop.

Can I worship you a little more? This is wonderful. You managed to capture the length and calamity of the Hatching perfectly, the intensity of it. Your names are good, the feeling. Everything.

I think Anne would be proud.

Holy smack, THAT was unexpected! Please continue, I'm dying to know more.

Beautifully, beautifully done. Your characters are truly believable, and the situation is canon... I have nothing poor to say about this, although I think there might have been a spelling error in there— small stuff! ^_~ Well, I'm hooked.

Ahahahahaha! Now I know where you live!

Or at least, where your fanfiction is. Nearly as good.

-makes squeaking noises, and runs away, accidentally hitting a wall-

Curse these walls!

Yes, I am insane. But you knew that, didn't you? I can't be bothered commenting on the story, but I did read it. Really, I did. And liked it. There, a comment. I surprise even myself sometimes.

I'm going to go find some caffiene, I'm starting to lose any vestige of sanity I had left. Fare thee well!