..hello, (skips embarassing moments)
you're fic is so good...please come back and update it..please...for me ...oh i should be studying for my exam..byebye..e-mail me if you update please...but please update!

This is such a beautiful story. You are such a wonderful writer. It's sad that this story seems to be inactive.

once again nicely done. the length makes it an easy read.

wow. it's so beautifully written. I'm suprised you don't have many reviews. I think it has one of the most beautiful structures i have ever read...and i read alot..."D

I love this story so much. I don't know if it's the ideas or your writing style, but either way, I love it! You manage to capture the characters original personalities perfectly and portray them as such too making everything you are writing, although set in an alternate universe, seem very real and believable. I enjoyed this chapter as well as the last very much. I wait for your next update with much barely contained anticipation.

..:Isiri:..

...o.O? Is it just me, or did I sound very grown up there? ...eh. ^.^

hello! nice story u have there! please continue writing yohxanna... an also write some haoxanna! tnx!

It must be exhausting to write something this beautiful and powerful.
I had planned on being a silent reader...but found that I could not help but make a few comments. Your writing has really matured again. Wow. I would want to read some more of this but it seems more powerful as a one shot rather than a multi-chap. But who knows...you're the writer, and you are very capable of great things.
Of all the fanfics I've read (of yours and everyone else's) I would place it at the top next to Krista Perry's "The Raven." sniffs sniffs I feel so jealous :D

i love it! i loved how you wrote it with their little moments and the length too! sometimes short is better no? anyways it was just wonderful. good job!