YOUR STORY WAS SUPERB! and scary too... Will you make another story about Stanley? Beacause I'm a fan of his?

WOW! YOU'RE STORY WAS GREAT! I LOVE IT!

Nice coleman fic. There's just something about him that facinates me. He's so crazy and obsessive lol.

Haunting. I had chills spreading across my body for every line that I read, especially the conclusion. This is truly how I imagine Stanley.

I love your incorporation of Stanley's use of dolls and poetry in his search for an idealistic romance. By the end of this fic I found myself curious of Coleman's motives; what really did drive him to become so easily fixated on a woman? ..Was his intent to cause harm, or was he just a confused, lovelorn man?

Considering your insight and fascination with him, you should definately try to do a backround story on Stan.. perhaps playing off of this piece and making it more than a one shot?

..Regardless, this was a thought provoking read, with some interesting elements added. I look foward to reading more of your work. ^__^

Very creative way of looking at our dear friend Stanley. Seems like he could be that kind of guy...or maybe he truly was just lonely? You portrayed him nicely in this piece.
I also like how you used a sort of...poetic dialogue for him, seeing as how he seemed to use such quite a bit with Heather. Makes me wonder if he was truly drunk when writing those letters...xD

Wow, creepy. I always found Coleman to be a twisted yet interesting individual. This piece of work does swift justice for him. Well done!

I'm at lunch...bored...
Okay well, Niena, you scare me. Seriously, you scare me.
TTYL
Rhian

Oh wow, that was great! you deserve more reviews for a great story like this! i was somewhat dispaointed in the game (sh3) b/c heather did pick up the 'barbie' dolls, as i like to call them! stanley was cool, it sucked b/c we really never got to see him through out the game