flames welcome huh...U suck! Nah I'm kiding actually it's the very opposite ^_^. I actually enjoyed the first chapter very much (especially Squall's POV) and I can't wait to read the rest of it !

Interesting chapter. Alot of information. Hope to see an update soon. Thank you.

hmm.. hello there!.. Ü sorry for the late review...

this was going pretty well.. your writing have improved...

great.. please continue.. Ü

take care,
Lady-Rinoa

Hope to see an update soon. m.. wonder who is that girl??.

Good start.. but why haven't you continued? Please keep going!

this better be a Squall-Rinoa tandem. oki?.. hehe. Ü

soo far i like it... hm.. my only comment is on the lines or dialouges...

when a person speaks, and a person replies to it. they shouldn't be at the same paragraph.. well, that was what i was thought. Ü just relaying it to you. Ü

hehe.. please update soon.. Ü i'll be waiting.

This story have an interesting plot, please continue with your work and update.

a nice start indeed!!. Ü

cant wait to read the next chapters .. Ü

you did really well!... and especially Squall's POV..

keep it up!. update soon..

*claps really load* yeah! great start, hope you post at decent times. i hope it turns out wonderfully, i'll keep reading. not very long but thats ok ;)