The Great Bippety-Bop 2006-07-31 . chapter 2:D Love it! Well-written Hao-Anna interaction is hard to come by--and I say "interaction" because I'm still not sure whether this is going to end up HaoxAnna. *nervous laughter* Though that would be nice, because this ROCKS. Hope you update soon. |
Essense of air 2006-03-01 . chapter 2 Poor Anna having lost Yoh like that and whats the deal with Ren.
Please update. I wanna see were this goes. |
yaksa 2005-09-13 . chapter 2Really? I thought you weren't intending on finishing it? *pokes* But, it's always nice to hide from other things by burying yourself in a good fanfic.
Of course, you know this, but I find your figurative language refreshing and inspiring.
But, on to the fic. I like how Ren seems to have not moved on from Yoh's death, but the others have. And I like that Anna seems to just have accepted what Hao made her, no fight really. She's smart enough to know there's no use in that. It seems almost as if she's only coming because there's nothing else she can do. Maybe she sees revenge, but it's not a conscious thought. Interesting. I love your characterization of Anna.
Update when you can. Good luck with editing!! |
distantdreamer 2005-09-06 . chapter 2 a good story, as always, though what happened to "You're Mine"? |
Porpoise-chan 2005-09-05 . chapter 2Awsome story. It's interesting that Yoh stayed dead. Please write more! |
kkkkkitty 2005-09-04 . chapter 1great! |
Chibi-Ra-Chan 2005-09-04 . chapter 2Second chapter was just as good, if not better, then the first! I absoulutely love how you portaited Ren, his adittude is perfect for the situation and He's funny too. *Has a sick sence of humor* Hm...I don't think I've seen anyone with this plot before, so kudos for you. Usually the same plots are played over and over again, but you have come up with somthing truly orginal. No one's thought about Hao taking everyone's Furyoku before. I wonder how our Favorite Pyromaniac did it. Speaking of Favorites...Wonder what Horo's up to... Gack! so many questions I must be boring you terribly!! Gomen!! So I'll shut up and finish. ^-^ I can't wiat for the next chapter and I know it will not disapoint me!!
Forever and Eternally,
-Anna |
Xbakiyalo 2005-09-04 . chapter 2Wow, an update! This section's really cool. Ren's personality is good and Faust - I'm presuming he's upset because he can't be with Eliza? Very good, update soon (sooner than two months!). |
yaksa 2005-07-26 . chapter 1I was glad to see some more writing from you. Rather dark story for Anna's birthday. I would have thought you would have written something nicer, since you love her so much, but it's still beautiful in it's vision and idea.
Interesting to see Hao losing his compsure for that split second, and the throne description added so much to it. Cements his position as the new Shaman King.
Anna with no furyoku could be interesting. First she'd have to get used to being without it. I also wonder if she could even still be able to see ghosts. Of course, the fact that she's now dependent on Hao for it's return will not sit well with her.
I hope you do take this up to finish it, when you have the time. And good luck on all the other writings you're working on. Update when you can. |
Xbakiyalo 2005-07-26 . chapter 1Gah, no! Yoh can't be dead, that can't be happening. Poor Anna!! Please continue this soon, I NEED to know what happens!
~Xbakiyalo |
Isiri 2005-07-25 . chapter 1OMG! Oh my God, oh my God, oh my God! This was totally awesome! *squeals* oh man, i've never gotten over how well you write, but this one was just . . . perfect. You created and then captured this moment so perfectly, I was just like, "Wow." And then didn't know quiet else what to say. Still, I loved it!! I'm really suprised people don't play on the fact that Yoh could have stayed dead more often, it leaves open so many varying posibilities. . . *squeals again* OMG I LOVED THIS! *beams* I really hope you do continue this story, I'm really curious as to how Anna will respond to not having any furyoko. Oh, and what else is there for Hao to do until his next visit? Is everyone dead(yoh's friends)? Are people without furyoko slowly being killed? . . . Okay, wow. I've actually got alot of questions . . . lol. Didn't realize that . . . but oh well! Please just continue with this; you've gotten me all excited and worked up over it now!! :p
Sincirily Yours,
:..Isiri..: |
asn water 2005-07-25 . chapter 1oh no i wonder what hao did to the others! anna's so weak now i wonder what shes going to do. i hope she doesnt kill herself but then again she probably wont because well shes anna. |
Chibi-Ra-Chan 2005-07-25 . chapter 1Damn... Oh Hao is so cool. heheh he took Anna's furyoku. Ha! The story already seems promiseing.I can't wait for more.
--Anna |