  Edwardjustproposed 2008-08-22 . chapter 2good. thats how it SHOULD be. kikyou is dead. end of story. good job. |
| -Azn-Grl-Twilight-Fan- 2006-11-21 . chapter 2 yay, nice kikyo!! |
| -Azn-Grl-Twilight-Fan- 2006-11-20 . chapter 1 nice |
| dAnnYsGiRl777 2006-09-16 . chapter 2 awesome story i was really close to crying. so sad, god! |
| Marie-dono 2006-02-02 . chapter 2 Aww... How sad, yet happy in a way. The ending seemed a little rushed, but besides that I liked it. |
| uiopqwer6792 2006-01-13 . chapter 1 Oh! Great story! The ending suprized me. I thought something else was going to happen. Great Job! |
| snowy 2005-12-03 . chapter 2 aww so kawaii! |
| animegirl17 2005-09-01 . chapter 2 This is pretty good, but I honestly never thought Kikyo would do something like that for Kagome... but, still, it was a great story! |
| kitty_katty_585 2005-08-22 . chapter 2 i still dont know if kikyo ia evil or good... |
| LiLaZnCrAzYgUrL216 2005-07-06 . chapter 2 YEA! great stori! but u should make it longer. still, it's great. |
| LiLaZnCrAzYgUrL216 2005-07-06 . chapter 1 woohoo! nice chappie. |
| nd 2005-07-06 . chapter 2 crappy ending, kags alwayz secon dish, i think thats fukd up ... |
| Banana Rum 2005-07-06 . chapter 2 Hm... you're right, it's not your best work (but that's like saying Howl's Moving Castle isn't as good as Spirited Away, isn't it?), and the end did seem a little rushed, but all in all, as whole, it came together fairly well.
I especially liked the whole Kikyou-ghost-Souta-grave thing. Though... I think everyone turned their eyes pretty quickly. When Kagome died, there were people to mourn her loss. Many. But when Kikyou died, not a one? Even after so many times, I think Inuyasha might've had at least one hesitant glance at Kagome before kissing her. It's sad that both her sins and god deeds boil down to nothing once Kagome was back.
Kalliel |
| Banana Rum 2005-07-06 . chapter 1 Nozomi...
It doesn't seem like you were very careful while writing this... There are a lot of errors (especially in the summary at the beginning of the chapter) regarding grammar and wrong word usage...
The story concept is fairly generic, but I definitely enjoy the way you 'fixed' that so that your story was different than the others. I have no idea what the heck Inuyasha is thinking, and Kikyou is being a little, how to say, -clingy-.
Well, on to the next chapter, I suppose!. ^_^
Kalliel |
| kawaiidevil 2005-07-06 . chapter 1 I've just read your last chapter, and realized that this is a two-shot(if that existed)...hehehe...sorry, i didn't know, great story by the way, i still don't like kikyou though, that was low of her to push kagome down the well, but then again she did revive her...still, kikyou is still not on like list...great story! do write some more like this, i like tragedy...as ironic as that is...
_~*nIkKi*~_ |
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