LMAO.

Wow, this is the first time I've inspired a story with a question. But if I knew what a scary answer I'd recieve I would have thought twice about it. Great job, I feel for you though, if this is what drives your beautiful writing ^^ Nicely done! Quite scary though. Hao...what a puzzle.

wow this is so original! the poor author... good thing the characters cant really hurt her.

note to self: Never try to hire Hao in one of your fanfics unless you want to be emotially scared for life. ^.^

I must say this is most excellent, just like everything else you write. I always find myself giggling at the beauty of your sentences. But this was great. Poor you. Writing shouldn't be so ** you. Now I want to finish You're Mine even more. I'm off.

Ah hah hah...Nice one...I was thinking if you could add more humor into it...And does Hao like the 'female' in the story? Whom I suspect it's you?

Very, very clever! But I see you have the same problem as me...all that attention to detail, we make our sentences too long, trying to fit in all the adjectives. Sometimes readers lose the meaning in the clutter of those words.

O.O This was deep. That would be so weird if the Shaman King cast rebelled against fanfiction writers.
On an other note, you had awesome and vivid detail. You were able to paint a picture with words. I really liked it. You have a writer's touch.

*Chuckles* That's the most beautiful crack I've ever read - and I mean that wholeheartedly. Although my favourite line had to be "Wtfzzfzz." Art.