love it

Nice story. Only thing is, I fell asleep. (Sry)
Kagome's got to be stronger than that.
Still nice writing keep going your doing fine.

Wow... how SWEET!

It seems like all the active authors on my author alert list are writing for the same IYfic challenge...O_o At least, everyone is writing about wishes, and most of them say that it's for the IYfic challenge...

That aside, Nozomi, I hate you. In a figurative, "why me?" sort of way. XD You really are too good at IyKagAU... This was wonderful; absolutely wonderful.

Thank you for writing some -good- IyKag, with all your peers going the other direction and writing -terrible- stories for the same pairing.

Kalliel

i pretty good so far but it doesn't really make sense if it's only a one shot.

Excellent story it was great but I think it has much more potential than just a one shot, but that is just my opinion. If it stays a one shot that fine with me because it was a really good one shot I loved it.

SO ROMANTIC! U ROCK!

Nice Try. Don't even bother writing another story. It sucks.