Ah, poor Navi. But she never really helped except when it came to targeting.

The best 'written in 1 minute' poem I've ever read!
Snaps 4 U :D

Very neat, and I'm amazed at how well it rhymed, especially considering it took you about a minute (anything I write with rhyming usually takes a day or two in order to get it right *bannishes inner perfectionist to a dusty book.* I really find these types of work interesting, in how they give a completely different point of view to a character (is Link really abusive to that fairy...? *worried expression*). All in all, great work!
Take care,
~September's Nobara.

Finally, someone who doesn't hate Navi's guts! :) I actually don't find her that annoying, really. And if it wasn't for her hints or Z-targeting, people would be lost. Give the cute little fairy some appreciation! *faves*

This one is really funny. That's pretty cool that you have a poem focusing on Navi while I have a story that she plays a pretty major role in. And I lol at the last line: "Or I'll Hey! Look! Listen! Even after your death." That part was really funny. I like how you chose to actually have the poem from the point of view of Navi. It's interesting to see that she has feelings too, I think. This is the first poem of yours that I've read that has a rhyme scheme, and it's really good. I've never been very great with rhyme schemes but I'm impressed with your's. It works really well.

I never really think about NAvi. She's just some crazy chick who screams everything she says. now i feel sad for her. Luv it.

Helpful hint: all first drafts are shit. It would be nicer for all of us if you'd go through a bit of editing before posting. Thanks.

That's cute, and totally true. that dang fairy is so annoying sometimes... and yet I feel bad for her cuz all she is trying to do.. but at the same time.. IT"S SO OBVIOUS WHAT TO DO SO JUST SHUT UP... sry... had to get that out. Great poem

nice

Thank god! some one is stiking up for the poor fary.

you know, i LIKE Navi, and i can easaly forgive her for repeting info all the time. why? becuse she cant help it. the games programers wher just lazy or somthing and made it so you couldent skip any thing.

I love Nave, and if Link dosent want her, then I'LL take her!

That's funny, I like it! Hope you write more poetry soon!;)

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wow, i really like this poem ^_^

I wrote an entire chapter in navi's POV - man Link can be so unfocused sometimes - good work - Atchika

this is awesome! :D

Wow, maybe 3:00 in the morining is the most creative time for you. Great poem, its creepu in a good way. Write some more.