aww, i'm getting this tingly feeling in my chest just from reading that tiny isty bisty thing

i dont no y u dun lik this story it a good beginin u jus hav 2 make it longer. other than that id keep goin.

Well, first off, with my stupidly grammar-sensical mind,

“I can’t believe…my family is gone.” Sango sobbed. She had just gotten the horrible news. Her family were in a tragic car crash.

It should actually be "her family was", since, even though there are more members of her family than one, it is only -one- family. ;)

In other news, you didn't really like it. I did. XD I have a strange weakness for your modern-day AUs, and I don't know why, since usually I stay away from stories like that...

The suicide thing was "eh..." but the rest was quite muse-provoking. ^^

Kalliel

Yo! This was alright, not terrific, but better than average. It took me a while to figure out is was an AU, and was confusing with all the switching back and forth so quickly, that could've worked better... : ( angst angst angst. still good though.